Hey, Ronak! I like your broad use of hieroglyphic images for the photos used inside and out the history head, it gave an accurate look at both the thoughts the people might have experienced shown within actual art made by the Egyptians. I also like your expansive timeline. However, I also have a few pieces of criticism for this poster. I feel as though you could have glued your images both inside and outside the head in a more organized way, instead of making them seem jumbled and in no specific arrangement. Along with that, it would have made the poster easier to understand if the numbers correlating to the theme the images represent were in darker print. And also, if I were first looking at this poster, I would have wondered which part of the globe this is pertinent to, as there is no large title of the region, which is an essential element in making an accessible poster. From the images, I was able to point out the similarity that the Egyptians, like the Mesopotamians I did for my poster, shared the belief in many gods, a belief of polytheism, but these societies were different in that Egyptians had an alphabet based on pictures while Mesopotamians had cuneiform, a non-picture based form of writing. Lastly,did you have any sort of method in which you placed the images on the poster?
What’s up Ronak? Your history head is very cool and has a lot of Egyptian art, which I think is cool and represents Egyptian culture well. I think you could have spread out your images more though, and I don’t see a title anywhere. There is a lot of empty space in the middle. Egypt and Mesoamerica both had elaborate social pyramids and both focused on agricultural production. Mesoamerican society didn’t depend on a river like Egyptian society did though, and Egypt had many trade partners, and influence from other empires, which the Mesoamericans did not have. What types of things are on your timeline? -Tim
Hi Ronak, Your history head has one of the more elaborate timelines on it than others. It has more details and more importantly, your pictures were very representative as well. As for criticism, your poster lacked some things like a title and organization that would have made it more presentable. For my history head, the society that I did were the Mesopotamians. These societies are similar because they both had their origins and key cities located near major rivers. They both were different in terms of religion influencing political power. the pharaoh in Egypt was the most powerful,where kings that had no tie to the Mesopotamian religion was the most powerful. What did the rightmost picture outside the head represent? -Harsh Dedhiya
Hey, Ronak!
ReplyDeleteI like your broad use of hieroglyphic images for the photos used inside and out the history head, it gave an accurate look at both the thoughts the people might have experienced shown within actual art made by the Egyptians. I also like your expansive timeline. However, I also have a few pieces of criticism for this poster. I feel as though you could have glued your images both inside and outside the head in a more organized way, instead of making them seem jumbled and in no specific arrangement. Along with that, it would have made the poster easier to understand if the numbers correlating to the theme the images represent were in darker print. And also, if I were first looking at this poster, I would have wondered which part of the globe this is pertinent to, as there is no large title of the region, which is an essential element in making an accessible poster. From the images, I was able to point out the similarity that the Egyptians, like the Mesopotamians I did for my poster, shared the belief in many gods, a belief of polytheism, but these societies were different in that Egyptians had an alphabet based on pictures while Mesopotamians had cuneiform, a non-picture based form of writing. Lastly,did you have any sort of method in which you placed the images on the poster?
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Matthew Martin
What’s up Ronak? Your history head is very cool and has a lot of Egyptian art, which I think is cool and represents Egyptian culture well. I think you could have spread out your images more though, and I don’t see a title anywhere. There is a lot of empty space in the middle. Egypt and Mesoamerica both had elaborate social pyramids and both focused on agricultural production. Mesoamerican society didn’t depend on a river like Egyptian society did though, and Egypt had many trade partners, and influence from other empires, which the Mesoamericans did not have. What types of things are on your timeline?
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Hi Ronak,
ReplyDeleteYour history head has one of the more elaborate timelines on it than others. It has more details and more importantly, your pictures were very representative as well. As for criticism, your poster lacked some things like a title and organization that would have made it more presentable. For my history head, the society that I did were the Mesopotamians. These societies are similar because they both had their origins and key cities located near major rivers. They both were different in terms of religion influencing political power. the pharaoh in Egypt was the most powerful,where kings that had no tie to the Mesopotamian religion was the most powerful. What did the rightmost picture outside the head represent?
-Harsh Dedhiya